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')【常用句式】
?、?Given the factors that I have just outlined, it is wise to support the statement that…
?、?From what has been discussed above/Judging from all evidence offered, we may safely/ undoubtedly draw/ come to/arrive at the conclusion that …
?、?Taking into account all these factors/ In view of the above-mentioned facts,we should draw/ come to/arrive at the conclusion that…
?、?All the available/ conclusive/ reliable/ striking evidence goes to show/ piles up to show that…
?、?All the evidence/ analysis supports/ warrants an unmistakable/ fair conclusion that…
?、?All the evidence/ analysis justifies/ confirms an unshakable/ sound view/ idea that…
?、?All the available/ conclusive/ reliable/ striking evidence points to the fact/ lends support to the view that …
?、?To sum up/ conclude,…/ The conclusion is self-evident.…
?、?Weighing up these two arguments, I am for ….
?、?Taking into account all these factors/ In view of the above-mentioned facts, I prefer …
【例19】
To conclude, smoking is nothing but evil as it is so harmful to people. All smokers should be taught of the great harm of smoking and be persuaded out of smoking. More importantly, we should protect our children from the harm of smoking through education.
【分析】本段文字是吸煙有害健康的文章結尾,運用了總結法,段首句使用了句式⑧。
2)后果法
所謂后果法,就是對所討論的問題或現象可能會產生的后果做出預測或分析。這種后果可能是積極的,也可能是消極的,需根據文章主題而定。這種結尾方式主要適用于問題解決型作文和現象解釋型作文。
【常用句式】
?、?Clearly/ Obviously/ No doubt, if we do not/ cannot…/ if we ignore/ are blind to…, there is every chance/ chances that…/ it is very likely that…
?、贏ny person/ nation/ society who/ which ignores/ is blind to/ fails to learn… would pay a heavy price.
?、?Fortunately, however, more and more people come to realize the importance of… and improvement si in near future.
?、?If we work on… from now on, in foreseeable future, we will not be perplexed/ cursed/ overwhelmed by the same dilemma/ problem.
?、?If we can solve the problem with no efforts spared, human being will not be caught/ stuck in the same conditions.
?、?There is no effective/ easy solution/ approach to the issue/ problem of…, but… might be helpful/ beneficial./ but our commitment will be rewarded as long as we insist on assuming our responsibility on it.
?、?Following these methods may not guarantee the success in…, but the pay-off will be worth the sweat we shed.
?、?The effect that… will bring about are far-reaching.
【例20】
All these things come to one simple fact: people are always trying very hard to get a better life. Any nation which ignores the importance of developing its productivity and consequently improving the life of its people will have to pay a heavy price.
【分析】本段文字是關于要重視提高人們生活水平的文章結尾,運用了后果法,段首句使用了句式②。
3)呼吁法
所謂呼吁法,就是在文章結尾敦促或呼吁讀者作出努力,對某問題予以關注或采取行動。但是需要注意的是,不能空感口號,痛下決心,這樣會使文章顯得空洞,不倫不類。這種結尾方式主要適用于問題解決型作文。
【常用句式】
?、?It is high time that we…/ It is ripe time for us to… in no half-hearted manner.
?、?It is essential/ necessary/ important/ imperative that effective/ quick/ proper measures/ actions/ steps/ remedies should be taken to…
?、?If there is time to…, it is now.
?、?To reverse the trend is not a light task, and it requires keen consciousness of…
?、?There is no denying that considerable attention must be paid to the plight of…
?、?We must call for an immediate action/ method, because the current tendency of …, if permitted to develop at will, it will result in the destruction of …
?、?Only when… all go into action can we…
【例21】
It is high time that we took some measures to protect our environment. Government should make a law to punish those polluting our environment, and the public should realize the importance of environmental protection.
【分析】本段文字是關于如何保護社會環境的文章結尾,運用了呼吁法,段首句使用了句式①。
需要注意的是,結尾一定要與主題相匹配,切忌談一些與主題無關的內容。另外,除了以上方法,結尾也可采用引用法和提出建議法。而且在實際寫作時,可以不必局限于一種方法,要根據實際情況將幾種方法有效結合。
四、適當運用修辭手法
1.比喻
六級寫作中常用的比喻手法是明喻和暗喻。明喻要使用諸如like, as之類的比喻詞,另外as if, as though, as… as, similar to等也可以表示明喻。暗喻一般不用比喻詞,只是用be動詞表示比喻對象的相似性。
【例22】
Working in big companies is similar to the role played by a screw in a big machine.
在大公司工作的人就像是大機器上的一顆螺絲釘。
【分析】本句運用了明喻的修辭手法,形象生動地描述了在大公司工作的情形。
2.平行結構
平行結構指的是將結構相同或相似、意義并重、語氣一致的語言成分并行排列的一種修辭手法。這種結構層次清晰、語意順暢,能夠起到加強語氣、增強表達效果的作用。
【例23】
If you promise to help when ou should say “No”, you may in the end fail to keep your promise and lose your friend’s trust. On the other hand, even if you have succeeded in fulfilling your friend’s will, you may fell depressed because you must have put in too much energy or money. You may even become a criminal if you help to do something.
【分析】本段文字將三個結構相似的句子并行排行,三個句子層層深入,表現出很強的邏輯性。
3.修辭問句
修辭問句以提問形式出現,卻并不表示疑問,其目的是為了引起讀者注意或表示強調。一般可分為設問和反問兩種形式。
設問一般自問自答,答案緊隨在問題之后;反問一般只問不答,答案就蘊含在問句當中。
【例24】
1. Will so-called lucky numbers really bring people good luck? I don’t think so.
2. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have their own opinions.
【分析】以上兩句話均運用了設問的修辭手法,答案緊隨其后。
【例25】
1. Why not work together to put an end to such immoral behaviors?
2. Isn’t it high time we eliminated fake commodities from the market?
【分析】以上兩句話均運用了反問的修辭手法,答案即在問句之中。
4.重復
重復主要起到強調、渲染和號召的作用,常見的重復方式主要有兩種:同成份重復和同義重復。
【例26】
We, though different in colors, different in languages, and different in cultures, can bind together to fulfill any tough mission.
【分析】本句運用了同成分重復的修辭手法,起到了突出強調的作用。
5.夸張
夸張是一種故意言過其實,或夸大或縮小事物的形象,突出事物的某種特征或品質,鮮明地表達思想情感的修辭方式。
【例27】
I have got a million reasons to object to your proposal.
【分析】本句運用了夸張的修辭手法,起到了突出事物特性的作用。
五、恰當使用警句格言
如果能在文章中恰當地引用一兩句警句格言或名人名言,不但能起到支持和突出主題的作用,還會大大增加文章的文采,達到意想不到地表達效果。
【例28】
As a Chinese old saying goes, traveling ten thousand miles and reading ten thousand books is the top ideal for people. Travel does broaden our mind. It enables us to appreciate beautiful scenery, value the culture and customs of a people and lean the history.
【點評】本段話是一篇文章的開頭段,通過“traveling ten thousand miles and reading ten thousand books is the top ideal for people(行萬里路,讀萬卷書)”人人認同的格言引出“旅游開闊視野“的主題,令人信服,且頗顯文采。